Choose It Narrative

Over the summer, Jack and his family went out to Buckland Beach. It was a very hot day so they went to Buckland beach to swim around Jack and his siblings Megan, Jake and Mia Jack was the oldest they were all so happy and excited, they got their stuff ready got some snacks inside of their bags and their change of clothes they already had their swimming clothes on and were ready to go. Jack and Megan (the 2 oldest) went outside to help their parents pack the stuff for the beach, mum went away for a bit to ring up the family to ask if They want to go to the beach? And they said yes so they got their stuff ready, everyone was ready and were happy to go to the beach they all went to the car and drove off they first went to the shops to buy some snacks and other stuff for the beach. They drove off again everyone was singing in the car with excitement acting like they haven’t been to the beach before but they were still happy to be going to the beach, while they dad was driving all the kids were falling asleep in the car dad was still listening to the radio listening to see if there was anything interesting happening in the world.



While dad was listening to the radio to see if there was anything interesting happening and there was something interesting happening, dad was listening and heard that there was a tall plant in the middle of the forest so tall that it could reach up to the clouds maybe pasted the clouds. Dad heard the name of the forest which was called the Tropical Forest which wasn’t far from where they were so dad thought of going to the beach they could take a look at what kind of plant was planted in the middle of the forest dad drove to the forest wondering What kind plant could this be? How is this plant so tall? & What Makes this plant so tall, dad wasn’t really far from the forest they were 5 to 10 minutes away….. When they finally got to the forest dad woke everyone up and went to the middle of the forest, Jack and his siblings were very confused why they were here instead of the beach Jack asked dad “Why are we here?” Dad replied back “It's a surprise” Megan whispered to Jack “What if there’s something wrong with dad” Jack said back “Don’t say that, Why would you say that about dad?” they were both arguing until mum ask “Why are use fighting?” then they stopped, they turned around to see dad but dad wasn’t there they all got scared of where dad was so they went looking for him…. Until they finally had found him mum asked dad “Why are we here?” Dad pointed to the sky everyone looked at the sky and saw the plant everyone was so shocked by what they were looking Megan thought she was dreaming..... To be continued. 

Writing Complex Sentences

Task Description: WALT: writing a narrative using complex sentences For this assignment I have been working on doing Complex Sentences, we had to work on these 2 things called the Independent clause  which is a sentences that makes scenes on it's own and the dependent clause which is a sentences that doesn't make scenes on it's own.