Punctuation Practise: Commas

Walt: use commas when adding additional information

Task Description: This learning task was all based on Punctuation based on Commas. For this task we had to fix up the writing by putting commas on the right place so that the writing makes more sense and is more readable.

Punctuation Practise: Capital Letters

Walt: use capital letters appropriately

Task Description: Posted late. This task was based on Punctuation on Capital Letters, for this writing task we had to fix all missing capital letters in the letter to make the writing make more sense and to make the writing look more readable also make the writing more understanding.

Choose It Writing.

Task Description: Sorry again for posting this at the wrong time. For this literacy task we had to pick 1 activity out of 8 and each activity had different questions for us to answer and post on our blog, but the activity I chose was activity 1 which was asked. If you had the choice, who would you pick to be in you bubble? And I picked family because family comes first and before everything also family will be the ones to be by my side through my good and tough times.  They will also be the ones I'll run to for help.

Poppy Task

Task Description: First of all sorry for posting this on the wrong time.  This project was given to us from our literacy teacher Mrs Moala and was based on a memorial day ANZAC day, the task we had to do was find things around the house and make a poppy out of it.  If you wanna know what type of things we used to make our poppy just watch the video and it'll tell you what we needed.

Narrative - Don't Let Go

WALT: write a narrative using dialogue.

It was a long night and I was sooo tired I just wanted to sleep. I wanted to go home but my mum was talking to one of her close friends so we had to stand there being tired and watch them talk, they were talking for hours. Me and my brother were so tired, so we started annoying our mum to take us home….. They were still talking until finally our mum starts calling us, “C’mon kids we’re going now” 

We were so happy that we ran to the car waiting for our mum to unlock the doors, “Unlock the doors mum!” yelled Jake. 

“Hey come and say goodbye before we leave, right now!” yelled mum 

So they went and said goodbye and finally headed home, it took awhile for them to get home. The ride back home was 4 minutes but they still made it home. When they finally got home Jasmine and Jake both ran upstairs into they’re rooms, jumped on the bed and fell asleep well Jasmine fell asleep Jake hopped on his PS4 and started playing his game, mum was still downstairs watching her favourite TV show F.R.I.E.N.D.S. While Jasmine was sleeping she had this magical dream. The dream was so magical, it was of a little girl named Bella going to prom in a nice, beautiful, white dress, she was wearing shiny, sparkling heels that were matching her dress. She was so beautiful but there was one tiny little problem, she didn’t have a date to take to the prom. She had to go alone. She didn’t want to go to the prom alone. She wanted to stay home with her pet birds and rabbit but her grandmother was begging her to go in this beautiful dress. So she went even though she didn't want to but she still went for her grandmother. 

“Wow, this is huge” claimed Bella. She came to the prom in a big, white, beautiful carriage, she was kinda excited but she wasn’t at the same time because she didn’t want to go in without a date, but she didn’t care she just went inside and ignored everyone that was looking at her, “Wow!! This is like a dream come true” Bella said with excitement. 

“Ewww! Look at her” people were saying.

“She didn’t even come with a date” people were laughing at her

Every girl was saying stuff about her and she wasn’t feeling good, she wanted to leave straight away. While people were talking about her she went for a drink she went to the table with all the drinks and snacks, she grabbed her drink and walked off but as soon as she turned around she bumped into someone a boy she spilt her drink all over him and herself, she didn’t know he was, she didn’t get to face the face until the boy said, “Woah!! Sorry I should have watched where I was going.” the boy said.

“Oh sorry, I didn’t see you there.” Bella said.

“Looks like we both couldn’t see each other, it's alright I wasn’t watching where I was going.” 

“Okay….. Oh sorry my name Bella, What's your name?”

“Hi Bella, I’m Tony.” “Nice to bump into you.” Tony claimed.

“Yup, ahahaha.” Bella laughed 

After the little accident Bella and Tony were talking for a while they were having a good conversation, after a few chats a special song came on a nice, claiming, peaceful song that brings the two couples together and dance as a beautiful couple. When the song went on Tony and Bella immediately looked at each other and locked eyes. They were staring at each other for a pretty long time. 

“Wanna dance?” Tony asked

“Uh, yea sure.” Bella answered 

Tony grabbed Bella’s hand, went to the dance floor and danced, they were both so good at dancing and they both knew how to dance, they were both so good for each other. Bella was so in love with him she wanted to tell him that she was in love with him but she was so scared that he was gonna reject her, Bella and Tony kept on dancing, they were locking hands and Bella rested her head on Tony’s chest. The song was playing for a few hours and they were dancing through the whole song…………… To be continued.

Task Description: For this weeks writing we are writing a Narrative about Don't Let Go, we are writing a Narrative using Dialogue.  So here is my narrative writing and it is about a little girl going to prom, she bumps into a boy and then they fall in love so fast.  comment down if you like it, hope you enjoy my writing.

Visual Mihi

Task Description: Every year at the beginning of the year we all have to make our Visual Mihi which is when we draw 4 things that supports or loves about ourselves, we also draw a self portrait of ourselves.  So here is my Visual Mihi and some things that supports me and things I love which are Sports, I love playing sports and I'm hoping I'll become a sportswomen, Family, I love spending time with my family they're my everything and also Family Over Everything, Cook island is my cutler and I'm proud to be Cook Island and lastly the bible, I have it there because I would want to follow GODS footsteps, I believe in GOD, I love GOD and appreciate him soo much just like I appreciate my family. 

Pulse Rates

Task Description: This week we had to go on the mat and learn pulse rates with Ms Tapuke.  Over all we learnt lots and cool things, we also got to present our work to the class and it was fun and funny.  So we all learnt something new.