Narrative - Don't Let Go

WALT: write a narrative using dialogue.

It was a long night and I was sooo tired I just wanted to sleep. I wanted to go home but my mum was talking to one of her close friends so we had to stand there being tired and watch them talk, they were talking for hours. Me and my brother were so tired, so we started annoying our mum to take us home….. They were still talking until finally our mum starts calling us, “C’mon kids we’re going now” 

We were so happy that we ran to the car waiting for our mum to unlock the doors, “Unlock the doors mum!” yelled Jake. 

“Hey come and say goodbye before we leave, right now!” yelled mum 

So they went and said goodbye and finally headed home, it took awhile for them to get home. The ride back home was 4 minutes but they still made it home. When they finally got home Jasmine and Jake both ran upstairs into they’re rooms, jumped on the bed and fell asleep well Jasmine fell asleep Jake hopped on his PS4 and started playing his game, mum was still downstairs watching her favourite TV show F.R.I.E.N.D.S. While Jasmine was sleeping she had this magical dream. The dream was so magical, it was of a little girl named Bella going to prom in a nice, beautiful, white dress, she was wearing shiny, sparkling heels that were matching her dress. She was so beautiful but there was one tiny little problem, she didn’t have a date to take to the prom. She had to go alone. She didn’t want to go to the prom alone. She wanted to stay home with her pet birds and rabbit but her grandmother was begging her to go in this beautiful dress. So she went even though she didn't want to but she still went for her grandmother. 

“Wow, this is huge” claimed Bella. She came to the prom in a big, white, beautiful carriage, she was kinda excited but she wasn’t at the same time because she didn’t want to go in without a date, but she didn’t care she just went inside and ignored everyone that was looking at her, “Wow!! This is like a dream come true” Bella said with excitement. 

“Ewww! Look at her” people were saying.

“She didn’t even come with a date” people were laughing at her

Every girl was saying stuff about her and she wasn’t feeling good, she wanted to leave straight away. While people were talking about her she went for a drink she went to the table with all the drinks and snacks, she grabbed her drink and walked off but as soon as she turned around she bumped into someone a boy she spilt her drink all over him and herself, she didn’t know he was, she didn’t get to face the face until the boy said, “Woah!! Sorry I should have watched where I was going.” the boy said.

“Oh sorry, I didn’t see you there.” Bella said.

“Looks like we both couldn’t see each other, it's alright I wasn’t watching where I was going.” 

“Okay….. Oh sorry my name Bella, What's your name?”

“Hi Bella, I’m Tony.” “Nice to bump into you.” Tony claimed.

“Yup, ahahaha.” Bella laughed 

After the little accident Bella and Tony were talking for a while they were having a good conversation, after a few chats a special song came on a nice, claiming, peaceful song that brings the two couples together and dance as a beautiful couple. When the song went on Tony and Bella immediately looked at each other and locked eyes. They were staring at each other for a pretty long time. 

“Wanna dance?” Tony asked

“Uh, yea sure.” Bella answered 

Tony grabbed Bella’s hand, went to the dance floor and danced, they were both so good at dancing and they both knew how to dance, they were both so good for each other. Bella was so in love with him she wanted to tell him that she was in love with him but she was so scared that he was gonna reject her, Bella and Tony kept on dancing, they were locking hands and Bella rested her head on Tony’s chest. The song was playing for a few hours and they were dancing through the whole song…………… To be continued.

Task Description: For this weeks writing we are writing a Narrative about Don't Let Go, we are writing a Narrative using Dialogue.  So here is my narrative writing and it is about a little girl going to prom, she bumps into a boy and then they fall in love so fast.  comment down if you like it, hope you enjoy my writing.