Water Sustainability

Task Description: For this writing task we were learning about Sustainability Water, we were learning about how important the water was to the earth and how we could keep our water safe and clean, without water the earth would be completely dry and humans/all living things would disappear.  "There is always time to help the environment!" 

Choose It Narrative

Over the summer, Jack and his family went out to Buckland Beach. It was a very hot day so they went to Buckland beach to swim around Jack and his siblings Megan, Jake and Mia Jack was the oldest they were all so happy and excited, they got their stuff ready got some snacks inside of their bags and their change of clothes they already had their swimming clothes on and were ready to go. Jack and Megan (the 2 oldest) went outside to help their parents pack the stuff for the beach, mum went away for a bit to ring up the family to ask if They want to go to the beach? And they said yes so they got their stuff ready, everyone was ready and were happy to go to the beach they all went to the car and drove off they first went to the shops to buy some snacks and other stuff for the beach. They drove off again everyone was singing in the car with excitement acting like they haven’t been to the beach before but they were still happy to be going to the beach, while they dad was driving all the kids were falling asleep in the car dad was still listening to the radio listening to see if there was anything interesting happening in the world.



While dad was listening to the radio to see if there was anything interesting happening and there was something interesting happening, dad was listening and heard that there was a tall plant in the middle of the forest so tall that it could reach up to the clouds maybe pasted the clouds. Dad heard the name of the forest which was called the Tropical Forest which wasn’t far from where they were so dad thought of going to the beach they could take a look at what kind of plant was planted in the middle of the forest dad drove to the forest wondering What kind plant could this be? How is this plant so tall? & What Makes this plant so tall, dad wasn’t really far from the forest they were 5 to 10 minutes away….. When they finally got to the forest dad woke everyone up and went to the middle of the forest, Jack and his siblings were very confused why they were here instead of the beach Jack asked dad “Why are we here?” Dad replied back “It's a surprise” Megan whispered to Jack “What if there’s something wrong with dad” Jack said back “Don’t say that, Why would you say that about dad?” they were both arguing until mum ask “Why are use fighting?” then they stopped, they turned around to see dad but dad wasn’t there they all got scared of where dad was so they went looking for him…. Until they finally had found him mum asked dad “Why are we here?” Dad pointed to the sky everyone looked at the sky and saw the plant everyone was so shocked by what they were looking Megan thought she was dreaming..... To be continued. 

Figurative Writing

Number 28

It was a sunny afternoon on a Monday everyone was having a nice day in the city everyone was doing their shopping and having their lunch. While everyone was doing their stuff people heard a very loud stomp the ground was shaking, they were all so scared of what was happening but some were trying to find where the loud stomp came from so they were looking around until they saw a big dark shadow at the back of them they turned slowly to see…. And there was the big scary robot everyone was scared and ran away everyone was screaming running away as fast as they could, but as soon the robot got closer the bright blue sky started to fade away, the white clouds turned dark grey and everything was just so ugly the robot got closer and closer, there was a little girl holding her brother in the middle of the street they both were so scared the robot was looking straight at them but soon a man saw them so he ran to go save them he took them to their parents. The robot was busting everything the buildings, trees, cars and the playground everyone was still running for their lives, everyone was just to scared people tried to run into their cars but when they got there they saw that the robot had stomped on it. Everyone was just so scared of what was happening. To Be Continued.

This writing would be Continued.

Persuasive Writing.

Task Description: For this weeks work we had to write about "Persuasive" so we had to write about a statement and my one is "If you are sick you should stay home from school."  and then I had to write 3 reasons why kids should stay home from.  Then after writing that I had to write a planning paragraph about that statement.

Vaka Voyagers.

Task Description: This week our task is about what the Polynesian use to find their way around and how to find a island to land on, we were reading a book called Vaka Voyagers that had clues on what the Polynesian use to travel after that we had to write in the answer on our task and then we were finished.   

Going on a holiday final Draft.

They had finally got to the hospital and into a room, everyone had made it to the hospital in a rush but lucky they had made it, some of them were so close of not making it to the hospital alive but they were so close to the hospital and made it alive. They had been taken to their rooms the hospital was so dark it looked old too, Nevayah, Nevaeh and Paige were in different rooms but their rooms were next to each other they were all doing okay. The doctor went on each saying, “ You will have to be in here for a little while. “


“ Oh okay. “


So all the patients had to stay in the hospital for a while until they could get out, the 3 girls were injured really badly. Nevaeh had a broken arm and had to wear a cast, Nevayah had a broken leg and had to use crutches and Paige had a broken neck and had to use a cast for her neck. So they were all injured really badly and had to use those things. They had to stay in the hospital for a couple of weeks until they could get out they had to stay in there for 4 weeks then they could get out, their bones were fine they felt better than ever and they only had a couple of weeks until they could take their casts of and Nevayah won’t have to use a crutches anymore but Paige had to keep her cast on for a bit longer than the other 2 her neck was really bad she had to wait for 1 month them she could take it off. “ I can’t wait to take this off, it makes my arm itches.” Nevaeh saying with excitement.


“ Same here these crutches are making my arm sore. “


“ I can’t I have to keep this one for a long time, 1 month what am I going to do with this one. “ Paige saying with sadness.



They had finally got out of the hospital they were so excited and filled with joy to have explored the beautiful island Samoa, but Nevayah to still use the crutches, Nevaeh still had the cast on her arm and Paige still had her cast for her neck but Nevayah and Nevaeh get to take it off really soon and have lots of fun without them. Paige was so sad she was happy she got out but she was sad that she had to keep on the cast for 1 month she wanted to have fun with them but instead, she had to leave the cast on.


They had finally got out of the hospital they were super excited to have some fun, they were in the hospital for 1 month which means they only had 4 more months left them they had to go back to New Zealand. While they were in the hospital they had missed their felt back to New Zealand so they had to stay there for the rest of the holidays once they got out of their beds they saw their suitcase on the floor next to them they had some help from the doctors getting down to the exit and getting them in the car, there was a car waiting there to take them to where they were staying Nevaeh, Nevayah and Paige had got in the car with a lady that worked there called Megan. Megan was going with them to help the 3 girls when they needed help, the driver had left and taken them to their place when they got there Megan and the driver took their stuff inside then came and helped the 3 girls get out and into the house, the house was really nice inside there was 4 bedrooms, 1 bathrooms, the kitchen and the living room which "This is really nice," Megan exclaimed.


"Look at the beach," Nevaeh replied.


" I know right," Paige told them.


The house was really nice the beach was really beautiful and the view was really pretty the sun was really shinning they were all going to have lots of fun. Once they had got inside the house Megan went helping them packing their stuff getting their stuff ready as well when she had finished she went in her room to pack her stuff then she went inside the kitchen to get some drinks for them they were relaxing on the couch watching some movies, everyone was so relaxed and just chilling when Megan had forgotten to cook dinner so she went into the kitchen getting some food ready for dinner the smell that was coming from the kitchen smells really nice they were really excited to see what was for dinner Megan came out of the kitchen with the food and it was really nice "This is really nice, what is this?" Nevaeh asked.


"Yeah, this is really nice."


" It looks good."


"It's one of my mother's recipes, but I can't tell you it's family secret."


"Oh it's okay, but thank you for dinner," Paige replied.


They had finished their dinner and watch some more of their movie Megan was in the kitchen cleaning up, "Megan can you help get into bed please," Nevayah called.


"Coming," Megan replied.


Megan helped Nevayah get into bed putting her crutches away and doing the pillows for her too, once her bed was made Nevayah went straight to sleep and Megan went back in the kitchen finishing off cleaning the kitchen Nevaeh and Paige were still watching the movie. When Megan had finished cleaning she went into the living room watching the movie, everyone got really tired so they all went to sleep once everyone was sleeping the moon was really bright and the crickets were chirping, everyone had a really nice sleep but it was just too hot for them so they were sleeping without blanket. It's morning Megan woke really early to make breakfast when everyone had woke up they went inside the kitchen and had some breakfast, once everyone had finished everyone got ready for the day Megan had to help Paige, Nevayah and Nevaeh get ready "Should we go on the beach?" Nevaeh asked.



"Sure, why not," Megan replied.


"Yeah," Paige and Nevayah said at the same time.


Since they had got out they now get to finish off their holiday in Samoa, they get to have heaps of fun and they get to live happily ever after. That’s the end of my choose it story I hope you really really liked it and really enjoy my writing, feel free to put a comment on it I would be happy to read it. THE END.