Going on a holiday 1st Draft.

One sunny morning the sun was shining bright the kids were playing and a 3 friends were going to a beautiful island called Samoa, they were packing their staff getting ready to leave at 4:15 in the afternoon. The 3 friends name is Nevaeh, Nevayah and Paige they were so excited to leave for Samoa, they were staying there for 2 weeks. The 3 friends were staying in a beautiful village called Tuasivi. They were all excited for their trip they were waiting for day to come, they were only two days away.


The time has come the three girls were jumping up and down waiting to get in the plane. But they were more excited to get to Samoa, they were waiting for 1h and 30 minutes to get into the plane and in their seats it took awhile but they had finally got to their seats they were all seating next to each other they had snacks to eat some drink they thought they were gonna have a great time. It was going to take 3.62 hours to get to Samoa from New Zealand, but they were still excited for their time. All 3 of them were so tired so they went to sleep.


While they were sleeping they could feel the plane shaking out of control and everyone screaming, the kids were crying. They woke up looking what was going on they saw that the plane was going right down to the island of Samoa and they were very scared what was going on, they hold onto each other very closing hoping they will make it. The plane had crashed, the girls were lying there bleeding, they got up trying to get out of the plane. Some of the other people had also survived but they were also trying to get out of there., they were all in so much pain and they all needed help. The 3 girls were trying their best to get out but they couldn’t, so they just started screaming for help instead. They were so scared and they were crying they were calling each other names to see if they were okay. But they couldn’t hear Paige, Nevaeh and Nevayah had thought she was dead but she had just passed out, they were calling her name telling her to “ PAIGE, WAKE UP.” “ WAKE UP PAIGE.”

But they were in luck cause Paige had woken up, and Nevayah and Nevaeh were so happy she woke up, but she was still in pain they were all in so much pain. Everyone was in so much pain they were trying to get out and trying to call for help, “ Someone please help.”

They were screaming for help hoping someone will hear and come, little did they know some of the kids that were playing saw the plane crash while they were playing they wonder what had happened. They went running to where the plane had crashed they saw that there was a plane with lots of blood and glass on the ground, they could also hear people crying and screaming for help but they couldn’t do anything to help so some of the kids ran to get some help they were running so fast, they got some help told them “ tatou te mana’omia se fesoasoani. “. which means, we need help


Then they said back “ O le a lena? “. ( which means, what is it. )

“ Sa vaeluaina se vaalele. “ ( which means, a plane had crashed. )


They got lots of people to help them so they followed the kids to where the plane was, when they got there they looked and they also saw what the kids saw. They tried to help them but it wasn’t enough people so the kids got even more people to come, when they had got enough of people they all got all of the people under the plane out getting them quickly to the hospital there was 45 people in the plane and 35 had died and 10 had been injured they tried to get all of the survives to the hospital really quickly, everyone were trying their best to get them to hospital. “Ua toetoe a matou i ai iina.”. ( which means we’re almost there. ).

To be continued.